The Major (Part XIII)

12 Aug

i don’t know how long i’d been kneeling there, i was beginning to think this wasn’t what He wanted,  when the door opened.  

The Major ~ and for a minute, as He looked down at me, i thought He was displeased, and i trembled.  Lowered my eyes, felt tears beginning ~

but He took my chin, tilted my head up.  

We looked at each other for a long minute.  i longed to touch Him, stroke His face, caress His body, but i waited.

i felt such devotion, and i hoped that He could see it, because i couldn’t have found words for it.

And it seemed like a long time that He looked at me, and then ~

“My slut,” He said, claiming me, “My slut.”

9 Responses to “The Major (Part XIII)”

  1. thesubmissivebf's avatar
    thesubmissivebf August 12, 2011 at 7:27 am #

    Like a dealer just offering a taste so we’ll stay hooked, lol!

    • sin's avatar
      sin August 12, 2011 at 8:00 am #

      That’s exactly what they do.

    • olivia's avatar
      aisha August 12, 2011 at 6:33 pm #

      @Sbf -LOL, yes, just exactly like that! aisha

  2. Faithful's avatar
    Faithful August 12, 2011 at 10:17 am #

    they always seem to know exactly how long to pause before they speak

    ~faithful

    • olivia's avatar
      aisha August 12, 2011 at 6:35 pm #

      @Faithful – i know – do you think they learn it in some kind of Dom school, or does it just come naturally? aisha

  3. vanillamom's avatar
    vanillamom August 12, 2011 at 12:27 pm #

    *aaaahhhh*

    i felt that tension, the holding, the holding, the holding…..

    and then, the release…beautiful, perfect.

    this is the most wonderful of stories, heartsister…

    nilla

    • olivia's avatar
      aisha August 12, 2011 at 6:35 pm #

      @’Nilla

      Thank you, sister of mine.

      hugs,

      aisha

  4. Bill's avatar
    Bill August 12, 2011 at 5:07 pm #

    Nicely set up and so well written!

    • olivia's avatar
      aisha August 12, 2011 at 6:36 pm #

      Thank you, Bill! {Smiling…} aisha

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