Twelve Words

17 Apr

His Hands

caress

stroke

smack.

My Thighs

open

vulnerable

exposed.

Our love.

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Borrowed the 12-word idea from ‘Nilla…. thanks!

18 Responses to “Twelve Words”

  1. Striving for Peace's avatar
    Striving for Peace April 17, 2012 at 6:56 am #

    very nicely done
    makes me want 3 weeks to hurry up!

    sfp

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:28 am #

      Thanks, Sfp ~ i hope your three weeks does hurry up!

      hugs,

      aisha

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  2. greengirl's avatar
    greengirl April 17, 2012 at 7:05 am #

    Very nice.

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:29 am #

      Thank you!

      hugs,

      aisha

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  3. yesthankyousir's avatar
    yesthankyousir April 17, 2012 at 7:46 am #

    Nicely done.

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:29 am #

      Thank you, andi!

      hugs,

      aisha

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  4. Mick's avatar
    Mick April 17, 2012 at 8:20 am #

    concise.

    mick

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:29 am #

      @Mick,

      Indeed.

      hugs,

      aisha 🙂

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  5. mouse's avatar
    mouse April 17, 2012 at 11:09 am #

    impressive!!

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:30 am #

      Thank you, Mouse,

      hugs,

      aisha

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  6. Amaia's avatar
    Amaia April 17, 2012 at 12:55 pm #

    Love! I may have to borrow that idea too!
    <3

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:30 am #

      Thanks! And welcome to it!

      hugs,

      aisha

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  7. Kitty the Submissive Wife's avatar
    Kitty the Submissive Wife April 17, 2012 at 11:03 pm #

    Nice. I am a big fan of the art within limits genres – I write random Haiku’s in the shower and I try 55 Word Stories from time to time. I am going to ponder this one.

    It is all part of my highly functional CDO. (Which is like OCD, but the letters are in alphabetical order, as they should be. Sorry, old joke.)

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:32 am #

      You are hysterical, Kitty tSW. CDO. {snort…} That’s great.

      i like haiku’s too, but don’t often write them, not in the shower or on paper. i keep telling myself i’m going to try to do one of the 55 Word Stories, but i haven’t yet.

      hugs,

      aisha

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  8. lil's avatar
    lil April 18, 2012 at 10:25 am #

    Ooh, very cool.

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:32 am #

      Thank you, lil.

      hugs,

      aisha

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  9. vanillamom's avatar
    vanillamom April 18, 2012 at 11:13 am #

    🙂

    You really have to give credit to my Master, who wanted me to go the fuck to bed…

    I’m glad you used your 12 words so beautifully. I smiled and nodded when i read it yesterday…perfect.

    nilla

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    • olivia's avatar
      aisha April 19, 2012 at 5:33 am #

      Yes, i loved the back story, and am sending thanks to your Master!

      Glad you liked it… yours was beautiful, and clearly inspirational. 🙂

      hugs,

      aisha

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